Something I Wrote

[Domino]

*applauds*

You must have been sitting in my History of Technology class.

 

[Martoon]

Villanelle-ing as the Paint Peels

That was beautiful!

Did you write that "in the moment"?

 

[EffEmDoubleyou]

Did you write that "in the moment"?

I think she stole it off the desk of one of her students. ZING!

But seriously, that's really good, and really funny Is that form meant to be sung at all? It kind of feels like a chant.

 

[Martoon]

I think she stole it off the desk of one of her students. ZING!

QFLOL!

 

[Jack Flak]

^^^^^ teehee.

I have a poam about Oreos. It's only a few years old, unlike my exceptional work. I wrote it in no time flat on a interweb foarum.

Run, run, run away from them, my unwise little friends!
Crunchy, minty cookies want no more than see you dead!
There's a little secret I know, and its name is Trans;
It only reveals itself inside the ambulance.
If you have no want of future, and do make no plans,
Eat all of the Oreos on which you get your hands.
Otherwise, please heed my words, for they you'll understand
Once your heart receiveth not the fresh blood it demands!

 

[Tallulah]

I think she stole it off the desk of one of her students. ZING!

*rimshot*

But seriously, that's really good, and really funny Is that form meant to be sung at all? It kind of feels like a chant.

ty! Not that I know of, but the villanelle does feel like a chant. With the repeating lines, it gives the impression of obsessive thinking. That's why it's good for expressing insanity, as in Sylvia Plath's "Mad Girl's Love Song."

Sylvia Plath | "Mad Girl's Love Song" | poetry archive | plagiarist.com

 

[LadyJaye]

Okay, as promised--my villanelle on the subject of boring professors.

Villanelle-ing as the Paint Peels​

I LOVE IT! This is the villanelle winner! YAY!

Now, as a reward, you may molest all of my cabana boys.

 

[Tallulah]

I LOVE IT! This is the villanelle winner! YAY!

Now, as a reward, you may molest all of my cabana boys.

Ooh, thanks! I will start with Jean-Luc.

I want to see one of your villanelles now!

 

[GZA]

Today in english we had to chose 20-30 random words and put them together into a poem. This is what mine was:


Whirlpool of red fire
What love seeks, altius
Found in heaven
Soon great tragedy of no dimension
What more should we pass on chance?
Stories quote evil fundamentals
The Abbey topics; John
Multicopy conformity


Mine probably made the most sens eout of anyone's in the class Which says more about the class then anything, cause none of them made sense at all.

 

[LadyJaye]

Today in english we had to chose 20-30 random words and put them together into a poem. This is what mine was:


Whirlpool of red fire
What love seeks, altius
Found in heaven
Soon great tragedy of no dimension
What more should we pass on chance?
Stories quote evil fundamentals
The Abbey topics; John
Multicopy conformity


Mine probably made the most sens eout of anyone's in the class Which says more about the class then anything, cause none of them made sense at all.

HAHAHAH! Good job! Now which words were you required to use?