Love poems series-Warrior

[Warrior]

ill make this into a series by posting from time to time

Shall I compare you to a fresh fruit that never spoils
That won't decay nor ever boil?
To feed my longing and bring shivers of memory?
To stay pure and chaste until marriage eternity?
A garden spring of jasmine, and innocent memories
A river of freshness, the first love I have seen
A sun to give light with your tender heart
But burning compassion, and playful darts
The shouts and cries of playful teasing
Which made me mad but now that I’m sad, make you pleasing, since I started leaving
My heart was stone and my words were few, but you taught love, and purity, too
Purity as white as the purest light,
For we were but children and had no sight
And knew not of what we know now

My radiant rose who I have chosen
I am the moon, and you are my Earth
You are the sun, that I haven’t chosen
But destiny did as warmth from the hearth
In wintertime, invincible
As a man needs food to be sensible
You are my queen, and I’d be yours for life
Away from the homeland where there now is strife
I’d protect you and serve you and love you and play with you
And keep you away from the land that would harm you
Despite the gentleness therefrom that lies
For I knew not what I know now

I want nothing but cuddles and kisses from you,
Except whispers of secrets and delicate coos
For if you gave me your kisses I’d give you mine, too…..
And I’d give you my life
For I knew not what I know now

You were my first and I hope to make you my last
To be like garments for you, and you for me
For we knew not what we know now
For we know not what we know now

i wrote this as a 17 year old

 

[magpie]

i just wrote that now in like 10 minutes....could someone edit it? [MENTION=22178]magpie[/MENTION] ?

Sorry, I don't offer my editing services for free.

 

[Warrior]

just deleted those other posts, including the ones with the second poem....terrible poem

 

[Warrior]

I miss you, I miss you, my radiant rose
I knew your sweet singing, and with it your smiles
Your hand in marriage as a man I have chose
If you so love me, and walk with me miles

Departing from rules, and crowdedness
Away off home, dreaming since long ago
To kiss me and kiss me, with flames, slumberless
To hug me, with warmth, and longing of oh much so!

I’d be yours, I’d be yours my sweetness, take me!
Be mine forever, and let’s love each other
Let’s be together and see and see!
The beauty within thee, shining from thee, and inside of me
Love me and love me, and never love another
be mine forever, and with kisses smother smother…
I’d never love another, just as we’d only love one another
radiant rose

So I can give my soul, and you can give yours!
Oh, sweetie…...oh sweetie, I’ve loved you since age 5!
Let’s reverse the tide, and be ours, and look inside
of each other forever, and grow old, til death holding hands beside
The fireplace, whether winter, or summer, for we have no slumber!
Except for each other, oh sweetie, oh sweetie
Be mine forever and take me and take me
Radiant rose
my love who ive chose