a poem

[chado]

here i am in nature
the dance of trees
warmths of the breeze
mezmorized by the seas
what beauty god has created
such a longing have i waited
i long for her so long we been apart
a song rises within my heart
one look at the clouds
and my tears start
who can explain what beauty is
i longed for him so long
i played his song
then he touched me
and i fell apart

 

[Abendrot]

Not bad. Let us embarrass ourselves together. Here's a cheesy tanka of mine:

As the sun rises,
Low over the withered leaves
A chilly gust blows
On this stroll I make to thee,
My radiant summer aster