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my pome - life is very pain

EJCC

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I miss Man
I do too. :(

I've evangelized "Life Is Very Pain" to almost all of my friends, and several members of my family, and now we quote it at each other all the time. We sympathize, for we once were trap in box...

We Want More Quotable Pomes!!
 

King sns

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Dear Man.

Life is very happy!
Amen! A man!
Life is happy since I realize.
The box is not forever.
The box is only now.

Is now forever, man?
Life is forever pain?
Life will end with now?
Does life end with later?
Woe, man, you speak hastily.
I am a woman in a box.


By sns
 

Fluffywolf

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i can see my life
so very very pain
man try teach me
but me was not man

still but a boy
trap in box

wish I was wyman
wyman not understand
this pain, very pain
i now understand


so i transform
no longer a boy
but man like man
very pain manly man
 

Tigerlily

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i can see my life
so very very pain
man try teach me
but me was not man

still but a boy
trap in box

wish I was wyman
wyman not understand
this pain, very pain
i now understand


so i transform
no longer a boy
but man like man
very pain manly man
Kidney stones? :alttongue:
 

King sns

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i can see my life
so very very pain
man try teach me
but me was not man

still but a boy
trap in box

wish I was wyman
wyman not understand
this pain, very pain
i now understand


so i transform
no longer a boy
but man like man
very pain manly man

I watch man and boy
trap in box
manly, brave, and pain
pain of box
free of world

I am woman
my life is man woe
I want to be man like man
like boy
I am in cruel world
no box to turn
life is very woe

by sns
 

Fluffywolf

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I watch man and boy
trap in box
manly, brave, and pain
pain of box
free of world

I am woman
my life is man woe
I want to be man like man
like boy
I am in cruel world
no box to turn
life is very woe

by sns

once i step in mirror
left is rigth rigth is left
i was wyman
n wyman was man

maybe all dream
maybe other realty
but world very pretty
and i was no pain

i feel myself
i can't stop feel
so much good feel
i grab big chest

feel like heaven
but no! chest was lock
tried to open
but no power

no strength!
maybe need key
then! i was in bed
man again very pain
 

sprinkles

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kyuuei

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:cry: [MENTION=8029]man[/MENTION]! Come back to us!!
 

greenfairy

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Haha this is INTP poetry.

Omg I love it!

Here's one my INTP uncle wrote as a kid:

I went to the meadow to sled
I crashed and bumped my head
It bled and bled and bled
Pretty soon I was dead

And one I wrote in his style:

My face is red
I am filled with dread
I must lie in my bed
Cause there's lead in my head
Many days I have bled
Many tears I have shed
I wish I was dead
Though I am well fed
With bread baked by Ted
To whom I am wed
Who always has said
That I should have fled
But I instead
Kept my head

And a couple more morbid/sarcastic pomes I wrote as a teenager:

Untitled Limerick
A man murdered someone with a broom
First the bride and then the groom
But as he fled
He got shot in the head
And lay dead in the middle of the room


Poetry
Brevity is the soul of wit
Somebody witty once said
But if tis so then I must not be witty
For this gives me aches in my head

Poetry is exactly what one feels
Someone must have stated
But if tis so what I think I feel
Must be overrated

When tranquil poetry flows
Like a lotus down a stream
is what we all must think
But if tis so then when I am enlightened
I will be famous in a blink

Poetry is a high art form
I think that I must wait
Til my feelings flowing into witty art
Truly becomes my fate


The best poem I've written aside from some haiku is about how I can't write poetry. Go figure.
 

Frosty

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Brought up on discord...
[MENTION=8029]man[/MENTION]?! [MENTION=8029]man[/MENTION]?!? Are you there? More pomes pleez
 

hjgbujhghg

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Holy moly :rotfl: :D Thanks for bringing this thread back to life!
 

Forever

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I think reading that poem... it's very painful to be a man.
[MENTION=8029]man[/MENTION] , that's deep. Man.
 

Frosty

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Oh trust me guiz- I have plans for this thread.

*evil maniacal laughter*
 

rav3n

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carpe diem
a pome by man
—————————-

lots of thing happen in life
there is good and bad
sometime happiness sometime strife

many things happen
more than u can believe
like a identical twin
u would never conceive!

this pome is tale
about a young man
always he fail
nothing go according 2 plan

but then one day
he rly lucked out
everything went his way
in spite of his doubt

he made cure for cold
no coughing no sneeze
they pay him in gold
but he started 2 seize :(

——————————————–
moral of this pome is u should cure epilepsy before u cure cold
pome so good
much creativity much laugh
a style understood
best when lifting a draft
 
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