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my pome - life is very pain

man

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A COLECTION OF MY POMES

life is very pain
a poem by man

LIFE IS FULL OF PAIN
as i sit
trap in box

MANY MANS FEEL THE PAIN
of not be as manly as me

i sympathize, for i
once was trap in box
worry about not be as
MANLY AS MYSELF

this is pain of life
womyn have LUCK
for they dont feel this pain

unless they transgender
man trap in woman body
THE HORROR

life is very pain
 
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niffer

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Yes~ "life is very pain". Captures so much emotion.

Lol amazing.
 

citizen cane

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are you trying to inflect some sort of tone or effect into this or do you just really need to work on your english skills?:unsure:
 

JocktheMotie

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Not only is this pome magnificent, your whole site is phenomenal. Good up the good work man.
 

lucibelle

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OMFG, I just checked out the site and "the big muscle" is even better than this! :D
How could you come up with something that brilliant XD
 

man

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heres my newest pome!!!



the sad ghost
a poem by man


once there was a rly sad ghost
his named jemaine
he went 2 eat som toast
at the house on scarey lane

knock knock knock
jemaine banged and pounded
ur house was vry long walk!
jemaine repeatedly hounded

then after long time
child answer the door
she had herd the loud chime
and jemaines powerful roar

pls giv me so tost
jemaine said with a tear
no I dnt believe in gost
the child say with no fear

jemain was quite sad
and hungry too
but girl was rly mad
so he bid adieu :(

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the moral of this pome is 2 be nice 2 ghost and 2 treat evry1 like u want 2 be treated
 

InvisibleJim

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man

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thx guys im rly glad to have my literature apresiated :)
 

Udog

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This pometery is INFP approved.
 
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