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    I made another song. This one is slower (it isn't actually as slow as you might think, but it sounds a lot slower). Opinions and tips are more than welcome.

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    [YOUTUBE="kwDsGiahrXY"]My song[/YOUTUBE]

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    At 1:26-ish or so, it really kicks in. I think a main melody line should be added, and perhaps a faster drum section. Perhaps the harmony line around 4:00 could be emphasized a touch more. Definitely experimental sounding. Develop this idea more, it's interesting.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shimmy View Post
    I made another song. This one is slower (it isn't actually as slow as you might think, but it sounds a lot slower). Opinions and tips are more than welcome.

    Link to the first song I posted

    [YOUTUBE="kwDsGiahrXY"]My song[/YOUTUBE]
    I like it, reminds me of 80s detroit techno carl craig, derrick may etc

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    Thank for the input. I'm through working on this song for now, but I may change it sometime in the future.
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    It's pretty sweet and chill. Digereedos and techno, potent. I can imagine this in some game soundtrack or something.

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    You should add some glitch-ish drum/percussion sounds, maybe like making it echo. I think it can still be downtempo but have hard hitting percussion.
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