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I made another song

Shimmy

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I made another song. This one is slower (it isn't actually as slow as you might think, but it sounds a lot slower). Opinions and tips are more than welcome.

Link to the first song I posted

[YOUTUBE="kwDsGiahrXY"]My song[/YOUTUBE]
 

CuriousFeeling

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At 1:26-ish or so, it really kicks in. I think a main melody line should be added, and perhaps a faster drum section. Perhaps the harmony line around 4:00 could be emphasized a touch more. Definitely experimental sounding. Develop this idea more, it's interesting.
 

Shimmy

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Thank for the input. I'm through working on this song for now, but I may change it sometime in the future.
 

Kenneth Almighty

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It's pretty sweet and chill. Digereedos and techno, potent. I can imagine this in some game soundtrack or something.

Download?
 

Robopop

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You should add some glitch-ish drum/percussion sounds, maybe like making it echo. I think it can still be downtempo but have hard hitting percussion.
 
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