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    Quote Originally Posted by renaiziphonts View Post
    People come and go,
    In the early morning mist.
    Distinctly distant.

    We pass each other,
    Seeing shortly eye to eye,
    Then we just move on.
    I really like the simplicity of this poem, especially given the topic! Quietly powerful.

    Quote Originally Posted by five sounds View Post
    i dig in my roots and
    stretch toward the sun
    buckle my boots
    but toss my gun
    Similar kind of thing here. I'm not sure I understand completely understand the intent, but I like it!
    Chimera of Filth

    A gruesome beast with dripping flesh
    Clings to me as a sick fixture
    My throbbing heart it gnawed apart
    It stalks and hunts me through mirrors

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    Quote Originally Posted by animenagai View Post
    I really like the simplicity of this poem, especially given the topic! Quietly powerful.

    Similar kind of thing here. I'm not sure I understand completely understand the intent, but I like it!
    Thanks. I was sort of trying to capture a specific feeling in it. Have you ever been on a walk at night, and walked right past someone? There's something different entirely about it at day. At day you nod and wave as you pass, but at night it's like your on a whole different plane of existence. There's a power to the distance created at night. Still, it was hardly a good poem, just a haiku.

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    I know you came for supper,

    But I am here for tea,

    without a loving mother,

    We're split apart in three.
    'One of (Lucas) Cranach's masterpieces, discussed by (Joseph) Koerner, is in it's self-referentiality the perfect expression of left-hemisphere emptiness and a precursor of post-modernism. There is no longer anything to point to beyond, nothing Other, so it points pointlessly to itself.' - Iain McGilChrist

    Suppose a tree fell down, Pooh, when we were underneath it?"
    "Suppose it didn't," said Pooh, after careful thought.
    Piglet was comforted by this.
    - A.A. Milne.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AffirmitiveAnxiety View Post
    I know you came for supper,

    But I am here for tea,

    without a loving mother,

    We're split apart in three.
    Did you write that? I hope you're OK!
    Chimera of Filth

    A gruesome beast with dripping flesh
    Clings to me as a sick fixture
    My throbbing heart it gnawed apart
    It stalks and hunts me through mirrors

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    Poem I wrote for my good friend's wedding:

    When there's as many people
    As starlets in the sky
    It's a miracle I've found you
    Amongst all the passersby
    Chimera of Filth

    A gruesome beast with dripping flesh
    Clings to me as a sick fixture
    My throbbing heart it gnawed apart
    It stalks and hunts me through mirrors

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    Obtuse obtuse,

    You're tight like a noose,

    Give me some info,

    and set my neck loose!
    'One of (Lucas) Cranach's masterpieces, discussed by (Joseph) Koerner, is in it's self-referentiality the perfect expression of left-hemisphere emptiness and a precursor of post-modernism. There is no longer anything to point to beyond, nothing Other, so it points pointlessly to itself.' - Iain McGilChrist

    Suppose a tree fell down, Pooh, when we were underneath it?"
    "Suppose it didn't," said Pooh, after careful thought.
    Piglet was comforted by this.
    - A.A. Milne.

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    It didn't and it wasn't,

    but it did and it was.

    It lied and deceived,

    It told truth and was open.

    It's simplistically shit,

    that much I can give.

    There was no hope,

    beliefs are a good lie.

    Stones in the brain......time to die.
    'One of (Lucas) Cranach's masterpieces, discussed by (Joseph) Koerner, is in it's self-referentiality the perfect expression of left-hemisphere emptiness and a precursor of post-modernism. There is no longer anything to point to beyond, nothing Other, so it points pointlessly to itself.' - Iain McGilChrist

    Suppose a tree fell down, Pooh, when we were underneath it?"
    "Suppose it didn't," said Pooh, after careful thought.
    Piglet was comforted by this.
    - A.A. Milne.
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    Fornication to obfuscation,

    verbosity in synchronicity.

    Machiavellian in machination,

    obsequious to salubrious.


    Well done, you have a dictionary.
    'One of (Lucas) Cranach's masterpieces, discussed by (Joseph) Koerner, is in it's self-referentiality the perfect expression of left-hemisphere emptiness and a precursor of post-modernism. There is no longer anything to point to beyond, nothing Other, so it points pointlessly to itself.' - Iain McGilChrist

    Suppose a tree fell down, Pooh, when we were underneath it?"
    "Suppose it didn't," said Pooh, after careful thought.
    Piglet was comforted by this.
    - A.A. Milne.

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    Look at it,

    what a thing.

    So paved with idle hands.

    Chopped at idle thoughts, do they hurt?

    It could always be worse, at least they tell you so.

    Close your eyes, it's only absence of light.

    Forget the shadow it cast, look at the illumination.
    'One of (Lucas) Cranach's masterpieces, discussed by (Joseph) Koerner, is in it's self-referentiality the perfect expression of left-hemisphere emptiness and a precursor of post-modernism. There is no longer anything to point to beyond, nothing Other, so it points pointlessly to itself.' - Iain McGilChrist

    Suppose a tree fell down, Pooh, when we were underneath it?"
    "Suppose it didn't," said Pooh, after careful thought.
    Piglet was comforted by this.
    - A.A. Milne.

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    A dump of sorts,

    a lonely place.

    A willing mind,

    a sloping pace.

    Getting slower,

    hopes are lower.

    Chopped up thoughts,

    in a mower.

    Tired soon,

    bed time gloom.

    The moon will loom,

    a wasted doom.
    'One of (Lucas) Cranach's masterpieces, discussed by (Joseph) Koerner, is in it's self-referentiality the perfect expression of left-hemisphere emptiness and a precursor of post-modernism. There is no longer anything to point to beyond, nothing Other, so it points pointlessly to itself.' - Iain McGilChrist

    Suppose a tree fell down, Pooh, when we were underneath it?"
    "Suppose it didn't," said Pooh, after careful thought.
    Piglet was comforted by this.
    - A.A. Milne.

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