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    Quote Originally Posted by colmena View Post
    I'm talking scripts. Hence the subject of the thread.
    You want a script? I'll show you a script. I've attached the play I actually turned in to Creative Writing in high school. I started it about 2:30 AM the day it was due.
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    LOL

    'oh uh!'

    I'm so plagiarizing that.

    *keeps reading*
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    Ti Ne Fi Ni

    -How beautiful, this pale Endymion hour.
    -What are you talking about?
    -Endymion, my dear. A beautiful youth possessed by the moon.
    -Well, forget about him and get to bed.
    -Yes, my dear.

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    Quote Originally Posted by colmena View Post
    LOL

    'oh uh!'

    I'm so plagiarizing that.

    *keeps reading*
    It was my creative zenith.

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    A little too good.

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    Ti Ne Fi Ni

    -How beautiful, this pale Endymion hour.
    -What are you talking about?
    -Endymion, my dear. A beautiful youth possessed by the moon.
    -Well, forget about him and get to bed.
    -Yes, my dear.

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    Quote Originally Posted by colmena View Post
    A little too good.

    Thanks. Everyone who's read it has either got it, and loved it, or wondered why I would write "something like that." It still cracks me up when I drag it out.

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    Default The Vealers

    The vealers wait patiently in the heat
    Not wishing to miss the cicada's beat.

    While Victor and Lucy cool their feet
    In Paddy River's lazarette.

    Dressed in green parsley in the Kingston Mall,
    The veal sausages dream of the cicada's call.

    When I take them home, they sizzle and sing
    Of long, hot days in Paddy's thrall.

    Victor.

    Notes: a vealer is a calf.
    Lazarette rhymes with feet and is a cool, secret place.
    Paddy's River is a nearby creek;
    I live in Kingston;
    And Lucy was my lover.

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    Shit. I actually thought that your point WAS to mean it like this:

    Quote Originally Posted by LadyJaye View Post
    Something I Wrote

    nevermind
    It stopped me thinking for a while. Simple, yet touching. The fragility of a writer. It is so easy to paint a painting, anyone can go and interpret whatever they want. It is different with words. More precise and revealing. It takes guts to write poems.

    That wasn't your meaning, though... so, nevermind.

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    That's fantastic, Victor.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jack Flak View Post
    That's fantastic, Victor.
    Thanks Jack.

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    Default The Mist

    In honour of Belle I will erect a tipi on the shore of Lake Burley Griffin. It will be a special tipi: very white, very tall; at night lite by an inner fire and during the day, lite by the sun.

    On the lake, in the water, will be a burning brazier which will attract the goddess of beauty. On calling her name she will appear from the mist high above the water with two pelicans flying on either side. The pelican on the left is named Neil the Knife, and the one on the right is called Victor the Babe. Above her, flying marvellous loops are a flight of seagulls and beneath her feet are a flight of grey ducks led by one lone, white goose. Flying further out, on either side, are two long strings of black swans, necks outstretched and strong wings beating.

    On the shore the echidnas shake their spines with pleasure, the platypus slap their tails on the water and the kangaroos bounce up and down, applauding with their little paws. While rising to meet her is a large flock of pink and grey galahs.

    Belle, for that is her name, is kind and gracious, and surprisingly is very well balanced and sensible, and always ready to help an animal in trouble.

    She does love poetry, and occasionally the odd poet, so after casting bread on the waters to feed her entourage, we will offer her a night of poetry.

    When we wake in the morning, all that will be left, is mist.

    Victor.


    Notes -
    When I fell in love with Belle, I wrote this to her.
    And Lake Burley Griffin is the beautiful lake right in the heart of Canberra.
    And Neil is an interesting friend.

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