A song I'm working on

[ENTP-Guy]

I've been working on this track for a while, it's for a project I'm working on and I wanted to know what people thought of it. So here you go:
https://soundcloud.com/shimboi/green-monster

 

[Kanra Jest]

Don't usually like much dialogue interfering with these kinds of beats. But that's just me, other than that I think it flows well.

 

[meowington]

Hated the intro, the rest is enjoyable. Like the melody.

 

[ENTP-Guy]

Thanks,
I'm not sure about the intro, I kinda wanna keep it but I kind of don't.

 

[ENTP-Guy]

Don't usually like much dialogue interfering with these kinds of beats. But that's just me, other than that I think it flows well.

Thank you,
Yeah I don't know about the dialogue. But the whole thing is for the context to match with the theme. Being well... Y'know. Green.

 

[meowington]

Thank you,
Yeah I don't know about the dialogue. But the whole thing is for the context to match with the theme. Being well... Y'know. Green.

I just understood it has something to do with Scooby Doo. The speech in the intro isn't very clear.

 

[Kanra Jest]

Thank you,
Yeah I don't know about the dialogue. But the whole thing is for the context to match with the theme. Being well... Y'know. Green.

While I get it. It just went on too long. An issue of length more than anything. Until the music started. The music was nice.

Where did you get the dialogue piece of shaggy saying that? Never heard of that before.

 

[ENTP-Guy]

I just understood it has something to do with Scooby Doo. The speech in the intro isn't very clear.

Officer - Turn the music off, please.
Shaggy - Sure thing, officer.
Officer - Where are you headed tonight?
Shaggy - Eurgh, like there’s this green monster Officer. Sneaking around at the old cotton mill, hehe we’re headed out there yee, to meet up the gang and like, try to catch it.
Officer - A green monster?
Shaggy - Pfff, hehe, Yeah, a REAAAAL fattie man.
Officer - Eh, you were driving a little erratic…
Shaggy and Scooby - laughing
Officer - Step out of the van please…
Shaggy - Punch it!

 

[ENTP-Guy]

While I get it. It just went on too long. An issue of length more than anything. Until the music started. The music was nice.

Where did you get the dialogue piece of shaggy saying that? Never heard of that before.

It's from an episode of Harvey Birdman
Here's the clip:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R76jSM7GfYc

 

[meowington]

Officer - Turn the music off, please.
Shaggy - Sure thing, officer.
Officer - Where are you headed tonight?
Shaggy - Eurgh, like there’s this green monster Officer. Sneaking around at the old cotton mill, hehe we’re headed out there yee, to meet up the gang and like, try to catch it.
Officer - A green monster?
Shaggy - Pfff, hehe, Yeah, a REAAAAL fattie man.
Officer - Eh, you were driving a little erratic…
Shaggy and Scooby - laughing
Officer - Step out of the van please…
Shaggy - Punch it!

Great if it didn't sound so muffled.

 

[Kanra Jest]

Great if it didn't sound so muffled.

Maybe it's just your ears. I heard it perfectly fine.

 

[ENTP-Guy]

Great if it didn't sound so muffled.

Alright, gonna try to fix it.

 

[meowington]

Maybe it's just your ears. I heard it perfectly fine.

Yeah well...weird. It sounds clearer on 2nd try. Never mind.