Poetry help!

[lizgeek13]

Okay so I'm writing this stupid poem for my writing class, and need a good ending sentence. Help?

~RED~
Red is blood.
Red is the beginning of life
And the end, death.
Red feels like love, and hate.
It smells like a blooming rose
Or like fire.
And sounds like Slayer
Or a symphony.
Red is pure evil, Satan.
-?--blahblahblah--?-

Any ideas anyone?
Thanks=)

 

[SillySapienne]

Red is the color of death.


^It flows. Plus it's what first came "out" upon reading it.

 

[SillySapienne]

Red is what makes us even,
turning individuals to men.


^This would actually be better.

 

[Thursday]

Okay so I'm writing this stupid poem for my writing class, and need a good ending sentence. Help?

~RED~
Red is blood.
Red is the beginning of life
And the end, death.
Red feels like love, and hate.
It smells like a blooming rose
Or like fire.
And sounds like Slayer
Or a symphony.
Red is pure evil, Satan.

>A color I wear too well<

 

[SillySapienne]

great line in and of itself, but because it follows

"Red is pure evil, Satan"

It would take on a darker meaning and perhaps change the general tone of the poem.

 

[Thursday]

great line in and of itself, but because it follows

"Red is pure evil, Satan"

It would take on a darker meaning and perhaps change the general tone of the poem.

hmm
*wheres my pondering stick*

 

[lizgeek13]

Red is what makes us even,
turning individuals to men.


^This would actually be better.

Oooh, i like this. I'll use it, thanks.