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    Okay so I'm writing this stupid poem for my writing class, and need a good ending sentence. Help?

    ~RED~
    Red is blood.
    Red is the beginning of life
    And the end, death.
    Red feels like love, and hate.
    It smells like a blooming rose
    Or like fire.
    And sounds like Slayer
    Or a symphony.
    Red is pure evil, Satan.
    -?--blahblahblah--?-

    Any ideas anyone?
    Thanks=)

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    Red is the color of death.


    ^It flows. Plus it's what first came "out" upon reading it.
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    'Cause you can't handle me...

    "A lie is a lie even if everyone believes it. The truth is the truth even if nobody believes it." - David Stevens

    "That that is, is. That that is not, is not. Is that it? It is."

    Veritatem dies aperit

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    Red is what makes us even,
    turning individuals to men.


    ^This would actually be better.
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    "That that is, is. That that is not, is not. Is that it? It is."

    Veritatem dies aperit

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    Quote Originally Posted by lizgeek13 View Post
    Okay so I'm writing this stupid poem for my writing class, and need a good ending sentence. Help?

    ~RED~
    Red is blood.
    Red is the beginning of life
    And the end, death.
    Red feels like love, and hate.
    It smells like a blooming rose
    Or like fire.
    And sounds like Slayer
    Or a symphony.
    Red is pure evil, Satan.
    >A color I wear too well<
    I N V I C T U S

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    great line in and of itself, but because it follows

    "Red is pure evil, Satan"

    It would take on a darker meaning and perhaps change the general tone of the poem.
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    "That that is, is. That that is not, is not. Is that it? It is."

    Veritatem dies aperit

    Ride si sapis

    Intelligentle sparkles

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    Quote Originally Posted by CaptainChick View Post
    great line in and of itself, but because it follows

    "Red is pure evil, Satan"

    It would take on a darker meaning and perhaps change the general tone of the poem.
    hmm
    *wheres my pondering stick*
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    Quote Originally Posted by CaptainChick View Post
    Red is what makes us even,
    turning individuals to men.


    ^This would actually be better.
    Oooh, i like this. I'll use it, thanks.

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