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    This is a trial run for a short story I have been working on. I would like the opinions of others on this short story. Please let me know what you think!



    Could you imagine a reptilian planet? If you think about it, It's not all that unbelievable.

    Some facts to keep in mind before reading this
    ALL LIVING BRAINS ARE REPTILIAN BASED.
    EVERYTHING IS NECLEUS BASED.
    "AS ABOVE, SO BELOW"

    Think of how a plant seed membrane encapsulates its nucleus(embryo). Over time, the mutation of this nucleus opens the seed membrane, and a living organism emerges. This principle applies to every living thing, from mold spores right up to human beings.

    Everything starts off as a reptile-like seed.

    All Stars, Planets, and Moons are, in theory, like seeds; they possess a core(embryo)encapsulated by a crust(membrane). Stars are the first stage of a cores life, planets are the middle stage of core development, the "embryonic" stage, and moons are the
    last stage. I don't know whether scientists have figured out where the moon has come from, or not, but to me, it looks like solidified magma.

    There are ancient stories that speak of an Earth changing event, 2012 being the most mentioned date for this supposed event. These events are thought to of happened many times before, every 3500 years or so. Surly, the information gaps throughout human history supply enough evidence for one to conclude that there were in fact, world changing events.

    Have you ever heard of the "Expanding Earth Theory"? Or, how about the "Hollow Earth Theory"?

    The Expanding Earth Theory proposes the idea that our planet is growing, the Mid-Atlantic Ridge does in fact show some evidence that the ocean floor is stretching. The Mid-Atlantic ridge is the center point of were Pangaea was separated into the continents we know today, quite possibly the cause for the sinking of the mythical Atlantis. However, this expansion is only on the Atlantic side of the Earth, further evidence of this isolated expansion can be seen when you take a look at the subduction zone at the bottom of the Pacific Ocean, also known as the "Ring of Fire". This subduction zone is a depression in the Earths crust, produced by the pressure of the Mid-Atlantic Ridge stretching. If this is accurate, what would happen to the subduction zone when the pressure from the Mid-Atlantic Ridge reaches its peak. A drop in the Pacific subduction zone would have a catastrophic result. So, what is causing the Earth to expand? The answer lies within the Earth itself. The explanation of this expansion could be due to the reduction of mass in the Earths plasma core.

    The Hollow Earth theory is quite simply the theory that there is an internal world within our Earth, an internal world with it's own star, oceans, continents, and good natured civilizations. It's imagined that these inner earth civilizations never come to the outer earth due to sterilization purposes, unless doing so only with a transportation devices. These transportation devices could be "aqua-terrain" (they can operate under water as well as in the air)These inner Earth beings have been able to harness the power of a star within the Earth in sustained increments. Meaning they can temporarily use the Earths plasma core as a life/power source. Sounds similar to the myth that the Atlantians used a "special crystal" as a life/power source.

    Continental drift is responsible for all volcanic activity, earthquakes, and climate changes. This drifting of the plates is caused by the expansion of the Mid-Atlantic Ridge. An increase in the drifting, would increase the overall instability of the environment.
    As the Earths plasma core uses its fuel it looses mass, this mass is being displaced to the weakest part of the mantle crust, AKA "The Ring of Fire" due to the drifting. (What does the plasma core use as fuel?... H2o!)

    It's a fascinating concept, to imagine that our planets interior harbors life...



    The "God" Particle.

    November 11th, 2011

    At 11:00 am Head Chairman Hans De Hoeken of CERN has announced the discovery of the Higgs-Boson particle.

    "I can't believe it", said Hans. I really can't believe it, the Higgs-Boson particle does exist. Do you know how much science is going to change after this kind of discovery? By being able to prove that this particle exists, tells us that we are getting closer to the answers have been looking for". Hans was ecstatic.

    For a very long time now, many philosophers, scientists, and priests have been faithfully in search of a very special element, the one element that governs all of what we know. It is said by the all ancient shamans, that this one element has the unique ability that allows all elements to attach themselves to it. It's what keeps the plants, the rocks, the water, the animals together. This one element was thought of as the sap from the tree of life.

    These shamans told a story about how the sons and daughters of the dirt were created; they spoke of a red mountain released from the sky, they called it Shonshu (Sha-n`is-hue). When this happened, the water released the rocks, the sky was scattered with fear, and the stars had lost their way, and fell onto the Earth. After the rocks opened up, and swallowed Shonshu, the water, as it had always done, pushed the rocks together, the sky was subdued, and the stars were no longer lost. When Shonshu was devoured, it is said that the red soil that was left behind, had mixed with Trivianam. After 10,000 generations, the sons and daughters Hunamas (Hue-naamas) arrived.

    This is their story;

    Before Hunamas, there was no moon, and the Sun rose from the South, and set in the North.

    10,000 generations before the arrival of the Hunamas, the Earth when through a change. The rocks could no longer be held in place by the water, and they were released. The sky became unsettled, and the stars were veiled, as if though a curtain was drawn to hide them form the horror. There was a loud billowing tone; it was as if the Earth was groaning, and writhing from pain.

    From the very place that Shonshu had fallen into, a forceful river of silvery white fire had begun to flow towards the stars. It was raining what looked like silver gems from the black veiled sky, these silver gems would later become uranium, thorium, potassium, and magnesium, and it was something Trivianam and Shonshu were responsible for. The white fire was the ejection of what were the unused remains of Shonshu. After the sky settled and revealed a new Earth, the stars had become lost when they could no longer see themselves in the water, and they were no longer set in original places anymore. The water would no longer bind the rocks, and the Sun would rise from the East, and set in the West. The discarded silver-like remains of Shonshu would become the Moon, the Earths ejected core.

    For the next 5,000 generations, the Earth became covered in vine like plants, and began to thrive on the remaining red soil released from the rocks, it infected their seeds, and these seeds over time would go on to develop lizards, these developing lizards would then drink the red soil that was released into the water from the rocks, and like the plants before them, it infected their eggs. This process continued for 2,500 generations, and throughout right on through to the development of birds, fish, and rodents. It was not only until the arrival of the Hunamas in the last 2,500 generations that the egg infections eventually would rapidly stop. Something in the blood from the plants, and lizards, and the birds, fish and rodents passed down into the Hunamas, had become mutated.

    Keep in mind that the Sun is growing slightly larger with every solar maximum, which means more gravitational influence on the inner solar system planets! As it expands, the outer planets are pushed out, as they go along for the ride. Picture the Solar System in a funnel like shape, with the bottom end at the Sun, and the wider end of the funnel at the top.

    Mercury is the last stage, and Mars is the first. Mercury is the remaining core of an Earth like planet.

    Venus is basically overrun by a runaway green house effect, Earth is currently showing evidence of the beginning stages of "global warming". There is no evidence of a Venus moon, but it could have had one at one time.

    Earth, the only planet that we know of with the amounts of water that it has. Water has likely come from within the planet, from beneath the crust when the Earth split open, or began to expand.

    Mars is smaller than the Earth because it hasn't expanded yet, as it slowly moves closer to the Sun it will slowly expand. There is some evidence that shows that the Earth is still expanding(Mid-Atlantic Ridge).

    The outer four planets have a completely different evolution.

    Starting from Neptune:

    Planetoid objects(Pluto/Charon?... Which could fuse together)are influenced by the gravitational forces of Neptune, and slowly become introduced into the main system. Due it's relatively small mass compared to Neptune, eventually it gets close enough to be projected toward Uranus. The horizontal axis of Uranus is what pulls these planetoids out of their inclined, and eccentric orbit, and places them in a more concentric orbit.

    Saturn. While in the orbit of Saturn, it collects primordial dust from the rings(not all, but some of the moons of Saturn have the same destination). After Saturn loses grasp, as the planetoid gains mass, it gets influenced by Jupiter.

    While under the influence of Jupiters massive gravity, comparative to the outer 3 gas planets, this is where the "planet" is compressed and a denser core begins developing. After it has collected all the necessary gases and elements, it becomes a comet-like object and is projected/ejected toward the Sun.

    Once inside the Asteroid belt, this is where it collects iron. After many many collisions... Like this>>

    it gains enough mass, and develops a solo orbit much like Mars, and the seed is in place. As the Sun grows, pulling in each planet one at a time, consuming compressed cores up until the Asteroid Belt, it's only a matter of time before Jupiter itself ignites, becomes a white dwarf, and consumes the Sun. This whole process possibly takes billions of years, or thousands of years to complete, once it's achieved, the cycle repeats.

    So, the trick is to get to Mars during the transition from the fourth, to the fifth Sun?
    ... They say that knowledge is free, and to truly acquire wisdom always comes with a price... Well then,... That will be $10, please!

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    No thoughts?...Maybe I'll refine it some more then.
    ... They say that knowledge is free, and to truly acquire wisdom always comes with a price... Well then,... That will be $10, please!

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    i'm all about it
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    That would make a decent story. I was captivated by how you explained the relationship between micro and macro universe, at least hinted of the possibility. Not sure about the science though (water originated from earth's core? sounds dubious). Refreshing to hear the plot doesn't end with reptiles at war with humans or something. That has been said and done before too many times. Also liked how you seemed to be moving towards an ultimate truth for how life works. Maybe you didn't say this but this is what I got from reading your chapter.

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    Quote Originally Posted by wren View Post
    That would make a decent story. I was captivated by how you explained the relationship between micro and macro universe, at least hinted of the possibility. Not sure about the science though (water originated from earth's core? sounds dubious). Refreshing to hear the plot doesn't end with reptiles at war with humans or something. That has been said and done before too many times. Also liked how you seemed to be moving towards an ultimate truth for how life works. Maybe you didn't say this but this is what I got from reading your chapter.
    How much thicker will the plot get when one realizes that reptiles and humans are one in the same?... Like I said, I'll refine it some more so you can think it over.

    Liquid is one of the four states of matter, and H2o can transform into all of the states at same place in time. No other substance that we know of can do that.
    ... They say that knowledge is free, and to truly acquire wisdom always comes with a price... Well then,... That will be $10, please!

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