Shade of your smile

[2ds]

 

[Halla74]

Very nice. Who did you write that for? You might want to give it to them...
Good luck!

 

[Kasper]

Beautiful

 

[BlackCat]

You should give it to the person you wrote that for. Or perhaps you have done like I have done before and written to no one, and hoped that said person will appear in your life. Regardless it's cool.

 

[Costrin]

Seems reminiscent of my own writing style, except female seeming. Or perhaps I'm projecting, as it is well written.

 

[JocktheMotie]

Send it to a card company and get some money for it.

 

[Lady_X]

i love it.

 

[Stanton Moore]

Very, very nice.

 

[sandwich]

In saying that you can rest in "the shade of [her] smile," are you saying that she has a huge mouth? That could be offensive.

 

[2ds]

In saying that you can rest in "the shade of [her] smile," are you saying that she has a huge mouth? That could be offensive.

walking around with her is like being in a permanent lunar eclipse...

 

[Litvyak]

I would never write something like this to anyone. At least I can't imagine myself doing it...

Very well written though.