Shared Haiku Game

[Salomé]

Learn the convention
Then subvert it
Rules are for the thinking-challenged.

 

[animenagai]

Rules are for the thinking-challenged
Learn the convention
Then subvert it

 

[Salomé]

 

[INA]

Then subvert it twice,
ten times, and watch it evolve
into a sonnet

 

[Starry]

Into a sonnet
Shakespearean lullaby
Let me count the ways

 

[INA]

Let me count the ways
your terse verse excites me: one-
minimalism

 

[WALMART]

minimalism
the weak justify their end
you filthy hobos

 

[iNtrovert]

You filthy hobos
The beautifully broken
Can’t see their own worth

 

[WALMART]

Can't see their own worth
Fields of automonomous souls
Blindly marching forth

 

[iNtrovert]

Blindly marching forth
In blissful ignorance die
Never asking why

 

[Starry]

Never asking why
The productive cogs tick by
Sheep, sheep fall asleep








This haiku is dedicated to [MENTION=7842]Z Buck McFate[/MENTION]

 

[Galena]

Sheep, sheep fall asleep
Conscious, I seal my eyes, count
hours til the alarm

 

[Starry]

hours til the alarm
set to dream of things to come
atrocious beeping

 

[Starry]

Did I just tag my entire friends list to the Shared Haiku Game thread? Yes. I just want to see a few haikus...is that too much to ask? What's wrong with this site...


I love you [MENTION=21883]sunyata[/MENTION] I truly do.

 

[indra]

another waking
break my flesh to wake again
life drips down these halls

 

[Frosty]

The time passes still
Caught in the embrace of dreams
There is no fighting

 

[Starry]

life drips down these halls
In a Lysergic Acid
Diethylamide way.


Oh whoops that was for sunyata haha. I'll do better here hold on...

 

[Galena]

Life drips down these halls
Stripped of the right particles,
it lost form, smothers

**Two posts late, please disregard**

 

[fetus]

life drips down these halls
In a Lysergic Acid
Diethylamide way.


Oh whoops that was for sunyata haha. I'll do better here hold on...

"Diethylamide Way"
We named our little driveway
Spontaneously

 

[Cloudpatrol]

Spontaneously
emitted sounds, deep content
hazy sunbeam sleep